The front cover is good, and the colour scheme is attractive. It is also well structures. However, I think the font does need to be changed because it looks quite amateurish. The contents page also looks good and is well structured. The double page spread looks good too but it does look a bit overcramped. Other than that, everything else is good. :) xoxo
I like the front cover, but I think you should add a date. I think you should also have a font that matches with everything not all different. Other than that it looks pretty good
I think the contents page looks really good and I like the photography throughout. I'm not sure about the grey colour for the masterhead and the font on the cover, but I think the layout you chose for the DPS is simple and effective.
The front cover is good, and the colour scheme is attractive. It is also well structures. However, I think the font does need to be changed because it looks quite amateurish. The contents page also looks good and is well structured. The double page spread looks good too but it does look a bit overcramped. Other than that, everything else is good. :) xoxo
ReplyDeleteI like the front cover, but I think you should add a date. I think you should also have a font that matches with everything not all different. Other than that it looks pretty good
ReplyDeleteI think the contents page looks really good and I like the photography throughout. I'm not sure about the grey colour for the masterhead and the font on the cover, but I think the layout you chose for the DPS is simple and effective.
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ReplyDeletei thik your text on the front cover looks a bit rubbish :)
ReplyDeleteand i think your contents looks crowded
but i like the dps
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