The main thing wrong with your front cover is the size of the barcode and the QR code. On a conventional magazine, these would be much smaller. I also think that your price, issue number and date should be next to your barcode rather than underneath your masthead.
As for your contents page, all of your feature articles are next to each other, whereas in conventional magazines they would be spread out throughout the magazine. This is also apparent in all of your sections. Also, how many pages does your Nicki Minaj article span?
As for your DPS, the only real problem with it is the fact that the final column is a little too close to the images; it looks kind of sqaushed.
The main thing wrong with your front cover is the size of the barcode and the QR code. On a conventional magazine, these would be much smaller. I also think that your price, issue number and date should be next to your barcode rather than underneath your masthead.
ReplyDeleteAs for your contents page, all of your feature articles are next to each other, whereas in conventional magazines they would be spread out throughout the magazine. This is also apparent in all of your sections. Also, how many pages does your Nicki Minaj article span?
As for your DPS, the only real problem with it is the fact that the final column is a little too close to the images; it looks kind of sqaushed.