Improvements?

What aspects do you feel can be approved upon in my magazine?

Elements you like?

What elements of my magazine do you like and appeals to you the most?

Music fans portrayed?

Are fans of music portrayed in a particular way from looking at my magazine?

Target group represented?

Do you feel as though my target group is represented? How does it represent my target group? Do you feel it conforms to the stereotype or does it differentite against the stereotype?

Target Audience?

Who do you think my target audience is? What age group, gender and ethnicity would you say my magazine was aimed at? Do you think it fits any sort of stereotype?

Magazine final

Evaluation of feedback on magazine

Strengths:

• Colour scheme of my magazine.
• The front page looks attractive.
• Contents page looks attractive.
• Contents page is also well structure.
• Good photography throughout.
• DPS is effective and simple.

Constructive critism:

• Text doesn't look nice on cover.
• Never added date to front page.
• Spelling errors.
• Text on the contents page looks quite crowded.

Changes made from comments:

• I changed the font on my front cover to blend in more with the rest of the magazine as it made it look quite "amateurish."
• I added a date to my front cover as I did not have one previously.
• I left spaces between the writing on my contents page as my feeback told me that It looked overcrowded.
• I corrected visable spelling errors that people spotted.

Music Magazine