Evaluation of feedback on magazine

Strengths:

• Colour scheme of my magazine.
• The front page looks attractive.
• Contents page looks attractive.
• Contents page is also well structure.
• Good photography throughout.
• DPS is effective and simple.

Constructive critism:

• Text doesn't look nice on cover.
• Never added date to front page.
• Spelling errors.
• Text on the contents page looks quite crowded.

Changes made from comments:

• I changed the font on my front cover to blend in more with the rest of the magazine as it made it look quite "amateurish."
• I added a date to my front cover as I did not have one previously.
• I left spaces between the writing on my contents page as my feeback told me that It looked overcrowded.
• I corrected visable spelling errors that people spotted.